Periphery
Thursday, February 17, 2005
  Haiku
Cold steel blue mountains,

that light post in the foreground

also belongs.

  ΒΆ 2/17/2005 11:22:00 PM
Comments:
i thought haikus were
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables ?
# posted by Anonymous Anonymous : 3/08/2005 12:46:00 AM
 
You're right ananymous, and I had another syllable there in that last line. But, I took it out because it was just there for the count, wasn't adding anything.
# posted by Blogger Saba : 3/08/2005 08:12:00 AM
 
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